All Comments on 'The First Time I Tasted Her'

Loved the story and it felt true and believable. Lydia was perfect and I so loved the line...,'Hell, I think I enjoyed pleasing her more than being pleased by her' which I believe to be the secret to good sex

Thankyou Mz Wilde..look forward to more

I loved this story, it was so well written that I could vision the scene.

Please write more Lydia.

Girl this makes so jealous, amazing story!

Fun and erotic — very nice combination. Not particularly original; but who cares. It’s how you shaped the piece and entertained your readers. We got to know the protagonists, enjoyed their banter not to mention great, erotically depicted mutually satisfying sex. Can easily imagine you sharing more about Lydia and Sierra; after all, you said this was the first time, which implies there was a second and … . If not, look forward to more fantasies that creep into your mind. Thanks for sharing.

Nice story, very enjoyable. Couple of little typos leaked through, but well done otherwise.

I enjoyed the story very much. Thank you for your effort.

while the attraction is understood and hot what would be more interesting is what happened after the whiskey wore off. Was it just raw sexual energy or was there something more

Very nice work. If this is the first story you've written, keep going!

Nicely written and very sexy. My mind took a little leap one year ahead and was imagining Sierra was now Lydia's partner and Super Bowl fireworks were about to begin. Lydia being more desirable than her walking dildo boyfriend, Sierra moved on and the two beautiful ladies made a life together. Then again maybe they just get together each time the SB comes around and see it as a tradition. I like the idea of them being a couple. If you leave the story as it is, it is still a nice read and hopefully you will continue writing. I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. Thanks!

Excellent first story! Look forward to more of your work!

Very hot and sexy for first time!

Very good story, and very hot as well.

I want to eat some pussy. I always fantasize about girls just never actually had the chance. I wish I had some wet yummy pussy to slide across my face. I’m touching myself right now and I’m so darn wet.

Very well done, and Very Hot ;->

Hot erotic!

A really good Story!