All Comments on 'The First White Wives Club Ch. 03'

Chapter 1 was good. Proper character setup and all the normal elements.

Both chapter 2 and 3 don't do anything to make the women different. It's like you cut all of the corners on that to just churn out another chapter.

There has to be something to the character other than action and a few allusions to life. Please give us more to them, maybe even something to show how they interact with the other slaves.

More humiliation and some ass worship. Nice story.

Très bonne histoire elle serait encore plus chaude si elle était plus détaillée sur la domination de la femme blanche

You are all over the place. Ch.1 says the black guy and her did it on the kitchen floor. Ch. 2 says bathroom floor. Ch. 3 says apartment over garage. Ch. 1 she slept in cage. Ch. 2 says she can't sleep. Ch.3 says she can again. Then your retelling too much. Should not have to remind everyone the story

Dear Anonymous,

I feel for you. Let me try and help you out. Every chapter is narrated by a different woman, with her own story to tell. The unifying factor is that they are all being dominated by the black Mistress.

I hope that helps.