by wantsomefun1951
Enjoyed your story and the ultimate conclusion. We need more stories in this vein.
My "friend" who commented here, and on a bunch of my other stuff, on October 15, 2012, is apparently not a fan.
It wouldn't surprise me if I knew who he was -- another writer who is nice enough to me when we're both logged-in on the other website where we submit stories, but who stabs his fellow writers in the back when he can. He's one of those guys who takes himself WAY too seriously.
Buddy -- we're writing porn and submitting it without payment to an internet site, using FAKE names. This is a hobby, a way to have fun, to express ourselves, and to entertain, isn't it?
Thanks for the "1" rating. I wish you had actually read the damn thing.
I love the progression in this, the buildup and pacing for the eventual takedown of Doe. I hope you write more about The Fixer, as this was a very thrilling (and sexy) concept beautifully done!