All Comments on 'The Flaming Girls Ch. 03'

Really enjoying this story. Sex AND the non-sexual narrative both feel very real!!

Girl you are sucha good writer, I am enthralled. Your character development is on point, and I even loved the poor old schlub Benny. I can't wait until the next installment!

Excellent story as usual keep up the good work.Love the small details.

... to read your works again. Not a complaint, but a request or hope that the erotic scenes you paint so well would be longer, more involved, more erotic. They are quite exciting and very much on point, just somewhat over too quickly.

Thank you for your skills, experiences and quality narratives. Very much looking forward to more...

Were this a shabby little paperback book I would never have had the pleasure of reading it.

That would have been my loss.

I find the occasional drop of a word to be a bit distracting, A better, maybe slower proofreading would catch those.

I enjoy that it is written in british English ( Not the queen's English ) rather than American English.

I think the positive praises have already been posted by other commenters so I shall not try to renterate them here.

I can only hope the author finds the negative comments I have left as construction criticism.