All Comments on 'The Flight Attendant'

by mrmark83

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Okay I guess, but disappointing to find yet another 'erotic coupling' story requireing the participants to be drunk.

mrmark83mrmark83about 4 years agoAuthor
Drunk comment

Hi,

Feel free to throw me a suggestion of what you would like in a story and I will try and write if for you. Just private message me

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Another great story from mrmark83

Brilliant

Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Terrible Dialogue!

Not only the appalling dialogue, either. But "six month's"! Why is there an apostrophe in months? by that logic, your "story would read like this:-

"...six month's now. I got promoted to Sale's Manager for a pharmaceutical company and we had been trying to branch out acros's the world. This meant I had no time for a social life or anything like that a's the busines's was really booming.

I alway's fly with the same airline in busines's clas's and because I am there so much I got to know all the staff on that airline.

There wa's one flight attendant that I really seemed to click with, her name wa's Joanne. She was about 5 and a half foot, curve's in all the right place's, blonde hair (which had been dyed a's you could see the black root's coming through. Not that it was an issue for me, I quite liked that look in fact). Her make-up was alway's pristine, alway's had a smile on her face." Etc.

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