All Comments on 'The Flin Wars Ch. 02'

Like the story line but they are very short - would like to see them a bit longer

Good story but chock full of spelling errors. Colonel not Coronel for one example. You need a proofreader.

Sad to see in the future that Navy and Marines LOST their customs of the service and saluted indoors while not under arms AND used an ARMY cheer rather than the traditional OOORAH!