All Comments on 'The Floating World Pt. 08: Adam'

So supremely erotic. I’m spent.

I do like that, I'm going to have to go back and re-read from the start now.

That may well be the perfect example of that slow, leisurely, whiskey-on-a-Sunday style of yours. Nice to see that Adam rubbed off on Madelyn and not the other way around. For some reason, I'm reminded of something my grandfather once told me - "a poor hunter stalks; a good hunter waits."

<In the morning, Adam cooked her pancakes, Maddy wrapped in a thick dressing gown, just watching.>

Those dressing-gowns sure do get a lot of use. :-P Another nice installment.

One of the finest qualities of your writing is how you explore the deepest thoughts of your female characters; with amazing accuracy, might I add? You'd have no way of knowing how many of your female readers have straddled a man's lap, seeing themselves from a new perspective, and wondered... "Is this what it's like to have a male anatomy?" It's the little things, for instance, the fleeting moments of petting a man's erection that give your stories a flavour of what's real. Your stories all have a distinct flavour... the flavour of this one is 'delicious'.

Dreamy discoveries ~;~

ssooo pleasurable xox