All Comments on 'The Floor Show'

Nope, that level of humiliation is just a turn off. This is the 2nd story of yours that I’ve read, to me it’s all unrealistic, jaded and depressing even with the attempt to show that it’s a consensual loving relationship.

Best of luck with your writing

Tess (uk)

I appreciate your feedback. Most of my writing is firmly in the realm of fantasy, and I can see why my stories with a more realistic setting might not be for everyone. I know I write what turns me on, but differing opinions on just about everything is one of the things I love about kink. I hope you find other writers you enjoy more.

I think this story is fun and the comment by Tess is absurd. This is fiction, not a documentary. I’d like it a little more kinky with more sexy details, but other than that, I read the entire thing.