All Comments on 'The Florida Trip Pt. 05'

While I really enjoyed The Baseball Trip, this story is even better with all the drama you have included. Keep up the good work and thank you.

You’ve created the rarest and hardest form of story - a massive group sex fuckfest that somehow has every character be their own independent person with their own discernible reasons for participating. Moreover I love how you’ve created a world where all this happens but the sex isn’t free of consequences - catching feelings, pregnancy scares, etc all make the world you’ve built that much more realistic and believable. Sincere congratulations and I’m looking forward to seeing where this goes next.

When you said things get fucked up they sure do! However, much like in real life, it really is the darkest before the dawn. Or just like the weather, it’s really bad then really good. Given the turn of events, I think Ben is much better off without Alyssa. Plus Kevin just seemed like a tool bag, no offense, he wasn’t good enough for Kelsey anyway. I hope your not done here. We gotta know what happens the next day, trip home and even maybe a little bit after!

Keep up the amazing work.

Loving this story.

one day to go then the trip home great job

wow, this chapter deserves way more attention than it's so far gotten.

Getting rid of Alyssa and Kevin.

However, Disney does not allow 5 adults in an All Stars room.

I'm very glad to see Alyssa and Kevin given the boot. Hopefully that's the last we'll see of them. The next couple of days and the ride home will be interesting. I'm rooting for Sarah to end up with Ben. Five stars and a favorite point!

Thank god Alyssa and Kevin are gone I really hated those two so much

The first two pages of this are among the only erotica to truly depress me. 5 stars.

So, cuck aside, Julia is 'Yay!'

Especially the readers!

I love this story.

How can we make everyone satisfied?

I am agog at your literary mastery. Beautiful, scintillating dialog but entirely natural. And the development and interplay of the characters -- it's like the literary equivalent of polyphonic music.

I'm so looking forward to how the rest plays out.

Brilliant!

Jeeesssssssuuuussss, what a rollercoaster! Love it!

Just when you think you've come to the end of the 🍭 another layer is exposed to be sucked on.