All Comments on 'The Florist's Assistant Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Finally!

Been following your series since it came out. I was kinda worried that you would just bail out on the story, but thanks for showing that you still CARE! :P

Anyway, very well written, loving the flow of the overall storyline as well as the slight twists and turns that emerge. You are a terrific writer, and your attention to grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. as well as overall diction and other writing-related stuff are all IMPECCABLE. Looking forward to part 4, though if you could, could you make it come out a little sooner? Just wondering.. :)

5/5 for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Heluva story

Well thought out, well planned, well written, all three parts (so far) I hope there's more. You have a vivid imagination, and it serves you very well in your writing abilities.

Tootight1Tootight1almost 10 years ago
good continue

chapter 4?

Tootight1Tootight1almost 8 years ago
good story

will this story be continued?

GreaserBobGreaserBobover 4 years ago
More Please

It’s been 8 years, time enough for chapter 4.

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