by dirty_lover
Been following your series since it came out. I was kinda worried that you would just bail out on the story, but thanks for showing that you still CARE! :P
Anyway, very well written, loving the flow of the overall storyline as well as the slight twists and turns that emerge. You are a terrific writer, and your attention to grammar, spelling, punctuation, etc. as well as overall diction and other writing-related stuff are all IMPECCABLE. Looking forward to part 4, though if you could, could you make it come out a little sooner? Just wondering.. :)
5/5 for sure.
Well thought out, well planned, well written, all three parts (so far) I hope there's more. You have a vivid imagination, and it serves you very well in your writing abilities.