All Comments on 'The Fly on the Wall'

Thank you.

Loved the twist on perspective. I've read many stories here where I wouldn't mind being that 'fly on the wall' and now you've given us a tale where the fly is a character. The heightened eroticism in some passages is beautiful. Thank you.

This is amazing. I loved the build up, of this story. I like this theme, not overtly explicit, lets my mind run wild. . . Thanks v

*****. Annanova got it so right. She also should get five stars for her comment.