All Comments on 'The Fool's Day Ball'

Well written. The main characters were well described as was their meeting and "dating." The meeting at the ball and the sex before and after was well done. Gavin's surprise at Erin's lack of variety of sexual experience was a nice twist. I hope there's a continuation of this story.

A great story. Real people in entertaining circumstances having fun. And in the end, the young couple gets together, and they have a chance to grow old together.

I love the rules and the gradual evolution of the relationship until they finish up as lovers and, I suspect, spouses. I do so like a happy ending.

i think a second entry on this being that she wasn't on birth control and she got pregnant. lol

That was a great story. You developed it well and considered the outcomes (no pun intended) and revealed what was a previous question mark. Great finish.

I loved this, slow start but you rolled it up nicely to a good ending, I liked the characters and not a bad plot