All Comments on 'The Fools Day Hunt'

Fun tale. Seemed a bit familiar, as if I'd read a similar account before, but with a different ending. Deja vu.

Five stars

This is an original story directly from my warped mind. But if it feels familiar, maybe you're channelling Lord of The Rings or Hunger Games! :) I wouldn't be at all surprised if there are other 'race to win a virgin' stories out there somewhere.

Clever writing. Nice twist.

A good opportunity to show how women maybe prefer oral sex?

Refreshing in style and content. Good luck with the contest!

5*

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