All Comments on 'The Football Bet'

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themailman13themailman13about 1 year ago

Wonderful story----hope there's more to come

mybikecruisesmybikecruisesabout 1 year ago

Awesome storyline of good friends truly adding the next dimension to the real love that comes with honest friendship. It may have come may from a husband and wife joke, but the story behind it made the joke a honest want to a caring help to their best friend, which turned into even deeper friends/lovers.

The next step is to help with workout exercises and eating to strengthen his heart to help him be around for a polyamory lover after they get rid of selfish wife.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

A follow up story would be great!

WittonWittonabout 1 year ago

Bad - very very bad. No plot - no tension - just paint by the numbers stroke

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Fantastic story! Well written and very hot!

NudeInMaineNudeInMaineabout 1 year ago

Very sexy. My kind of Super Bowl party. Did they ever eat or drink the snacks and alcohol?

BihusbanwifeloverBihusbanwifeloverabout 1 year ago

I’m about to cum myself after reading this!!! So hot!!!

bbarebbareabout 1 year ago

Great start! I'm sure there's going to be more if George's wife finds out! George is lucky to have a friend like Henry (as well as his willing wife!)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great story! Loved it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

good clean fun! well they did shower at some stage?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Loved it! I wish I had friends like that@

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

great story. i have also had a threesome with a mate and my ex wife. only thing that hits me about the story is she seems more into the friend. i wonder if in the future she would leave her husband for his friend as he was just like a back up to her

Grogu269Grogu269about 1 year ago

I'm a fan of group sex and anything anal, but the oral attention to Maria's ass got to me. Your choice of words is perfect for such a story. I adore a woman who will let me eat her ass just for the fun of it.

Rob_RoyaleRob_Royale4 months ago

Great fun and well done!

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