by Spyder23
A good story but I couldn't find why they were on earth in the first place dispite reading it twice.
This chapter didn't seem quite as good as the earlier ones, but maybe I'm just sad that this was the end... It did get better about halfway through, so maybe you were just struggling with the transition. I still enjoyed it and rated it as high as the others.
One thing that did bug me was, if she cared for him that much, why did she wait 4 hours for him to call her instead of calling to check on him. Last I knew, cell phones worked both ways...