All Comments on 'The Foreigner Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

A good story but I couldn't find why they were on earth in the first place dispite reading it twice.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

This chapter didn't seem quite as good as the earlier ones, but maybe I'm just sad that this was the end... It did get better about halfway through, so maybe you were just struggling with the transition. I still enjoyed it and rated it as high as the others.

One thing that did bug me was, if she cared for him that much, why did she wait 4 hours for him to call her instead of calling to check on him. Last I knew, cell phones worked both ways...

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Some authors know the beginning, middle and end of a story before they write it. That’s not my style. I get an idea for a story and write it on the fly, never knowing where it will take me. I keep a pad of big and small ideas to weave into future stories next to my bed. I know...

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