All Comments on 'The Fountain Ch. 01'

Fabulous, but I sure hope the next chapter comes soon.

Good start. I’m looking forward to the rest of the story.

Bloody hell, please tell me your going to continue on with this story, you’ve got me hooked..⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Interesting. please continue

Waiting for the next chapter.

Not sure where this is going, but it better get there quick.

the story is very good keep writing

Very intriguing, looking forward to the next part.

Good Story, but why so short? could be much longer for a first chapter

thx for the writing

A very promising start, I'm imagining so many different thing. Please continue.

I am going to need more before I pass judgment on the MC

Okeee!!!

Let’s see what happens. The story does not flow easily, just seems out of kilter a bit.

Thus far 3/5

Long, boring.....going no where...???

Grandma and mom wearing black stockings got my full attention and the end got me hooked please bring on chapter 2

Fantastic, really loving it! Lucky Henry!

This is an interesting introduction to the rest of the story. Character development is adequate. I hope I enjoy the rest of the story.

no story, just a teaser

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

seems like an interesting premise, but don't be fooled... this turns into a ludicrous, untagged, deceptive pile of shit to force untagged trans/gay/metrosexual bullshit onto your reading queue. If you're not into that, eject now.