All Comments on 'The Fountain Ch. 03'

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Eugenia4allEugenia4allabout 3 years ago

loved the story , entertainment at its finest! erotic entertainment . hope sister can be "the one"

Bedroomeyes81Bedroomeyes81about 3 years ago

Wow just was crazy and sweet at the same time. Can't wait to see how this plays out

Wash2015Wash2015about 3 years ago

Grandma is a bitch and I am still confused on the family tree. Is the mom from outside the family? The way she talked about grandma pulling rank felt like she was part of the fountain tribe her whole life but the uncle being dad's sibling and true love not an outside woman. But mom got pregnant from dad and so then the mom came into this group as an adult and is not blood related to dad? If dad hasn't died and stayed as the fountain, the son still only gets hard for family, would they have had sex with the son without getting the benefits of staying young? It is all very confusing.

linnearlinnearabout 3 years ago
Brilliant Concept

One of my new favorites. I always love a good mother/son story and this is that and so much more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nope, sister can not be "the one". The women in the family can not be impregnated by him.

What's more annoying is, is that the MC's in those stories buckle far too quickly because he got some pussy.

Really? He was drugged and then raped by two different women and he is ok with it?

That has nothing with Love to do, they just wanted to be young again.

I would leave them out of spite and die somewhere. Let them see where they get their fountain then.

Sorry, I know it's fantasy but such behavior gets me mad. ^^

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I rated the story 4 stars. It's an interesting plot but have trouble with the whole rape thing. And make no bones about it, what happened in the story was rape. I agree with Wash2015, the family tree is hard to follow and there are definitely holes in the plot line. I guess this is the author's take on a DOM/SUB relationship? I also agree with ANon's comment...leave them all to grow old!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Find Granny in the morning and punch her in the mouth. If she gets up punch her again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Mom is always a hotter fuck because she's younger and firmer. My sexy mom and I have sex. This story made me horny. It's just past 7pm and I'm going to call her and tell her to put on a short see-through nighty, and no panties. We won't have much time since I have to work tomorrow.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

bom! a ideia em si para tais atos eu gostei... diferente e não muito apresado, mas o texto em si e complexo, esta complicado de entender os objetivos não ficou claro... a avó dele e descendente da bruxa? o pai dele e filho da avó dele? porque só ela tem mas poderes? bom a bruxa ficava com seu filho, antes de ser descoberta pela a antiga aldeia e entrarem noutras, ante de seu filho casar com uma mulher e começar a longa linhagem aqui presente a pergunta é..... a mãe do pantera teve alguma filha depois? porque há avó era a mais próxima sanguínea dele?

Foxterot7aFoxterot7aalmost 3 years ago

I liked tis story. This is the first story that I have read that I did not have to analyze nor really thing about. It was just fun reading. There was no love between the grandmother and grandson. This was strictly a power play. The love between mother and son felt real. Chapter 3 rated a 5. Good work.

Aussie1951Aussie1951almost 3 years ago

Great storyline, can’t wait for him to bang his sisters. What a shame he can’t make them pregnant…

nightdragon1nightdragon1almost 2 years ago

Have it a 3. Too much repetition!!!!!!

blackknight314blackknight31410 months ago

Good job, thanks for sharing your work!

muskyboymuskyboy4 months ago

The reluctant son trope is getting a little old.....

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