by potsherd22
Isn't seven years rather a long time to spend thinking how next to take the story?
Open relationships does not make a love story, just destroys it. Keep it as it is and maybe finish it at their own wedding.
The back story carried the piece, so what ever you do, it will need some conflict and drama. This is fine as a two pager, but need more for part 3 or four. You could do a Pigmalion, where in her travels she begins teaching him about sexual technique, him in angush because she insists on an open relationship.??
Chilley
An excellent well spun yarn. I really enjoyed how you set the scene in post war England. One direction I can suggest is to tell the story of the wedding turning into a completely decadent, but tasteful, orgy.
I don't think you need much in the way of suggestions from us - except for continued encouragement from Madge and dad .
And I've almost forgotten about the mathematical permutations of four bridesmaids and perhaps bride herself looking for glamour photos - first time doesn't preclude other situations