All Comments on 'The Fragile Abandoned Ch. 08'

thanks for the latest addition I was worried you had given up on the series something I have seen a good deal of writers doing here lately which feels me with disappointment but you have done well and this is getting interesting wonder whats next for this

That little girl is such a tricky minx!! This is getting too good!!!

I really wanted to give you a 4 because you made Jessica bisexual. But it still only gets a 3 because she is competing with Andy for Natalie instead of loving them both as a Triad. I'm also extremely concerned with what appears to be the next to the final chapter. You're consistently submitting 2 page snippets and the next chapter is your final effort. You have way too many open ends in your story for you to finish up with only 5k words or so.

Literotica.com is littered with so damn many unfinished works that they need to change the name. 3/5