by Dangerdaze
I really enjoyed the start and can't wait for the next chapter!!!
Need some story to get beyond an average -3- rating.
Nice start to the story.....well played leaving us hanging!
Very short but can’t wait to read where it goes
So happy to see positive results so far! Part two is out now and I’m just about finished with part 3! Love any feedback feel free to message me!
Love the setup.❤️
Love we’re this is heading