All Comments on 'The Free-baller in the Airport'

Oh my goodness what a hot story again LoganPrejean337 - I'm begging you we need a part 2

You got five stars from me very nice story, sexy erotic. BUT what the hell is Scott’s issue?

I can see some dramatic element at the end you know you got me here, I love some drama in stories :D

Do you know I'm gonna nag you about the follow-up? Right? :D

"I have always been so jealous of guys left intact. Damn I wish I would know what that feels like. I've always heard that you lose sensitivity when you are cut "

Yeah, me too. And not to mention all the missing nerve endings from foreskin. Nonconsensual mutilation should be illegal!

WOW, WOW, WOW!!! While I'm generally of the opinion that an artist usually thinks his latest work is his best, this story was definitely at the very least one of your best. And as your stories frequently do, you surpassed *****s with this one. I've got to say though, right now I HATE YOU SO MUCH for leaving me hanging. With the strong connection Logan and Scott had and those little touches of humor, I was positive this was going to be a one-chapter story with a HEA. I definitely never saw that ending coming. You've done it again, great job. MLF

Fantastic, hot story. Loved it from the start. Great sex. The end was a downer though so hope there is more to cum!

A great premise, being stuck overnight, and having hot M2M sex. More, please!

fine story, but not as good as Stepbros, **** stars for the effort

Dang why stop it like that?! WOW it is intense!!

Hey, don't be trashing the non-turtlenecks. Speaking for us cut guys, maybe you're not aware, but we actually last longer because of that lack of sensitivity. Taking more time to orgasm makes it more intense and I've never had a partner complain about the extended time either. ;-)

Oh, my. Where will this go? I was very happy when I got to, "I would be a happy man if I could have this every day for the rest of my life. Wait, could I?" And it feels like it's heading that way. But what about that ending? Can't wait to see where things go!

It is said that good writers make you feel strong emotions and this story didn't deliver. I didn't feel you in 'THE FREE-BALLER IN THE AIRPORT'. You are one of the best writers in the gay space on Lit, but FREE-BALLER lacks something. No chemistry between sexy young Scott and old dad Logan?

Your skill in bringing the nuances of a developing, and potentially difficult relationship onto the written page is done masterly in Finally, Step Bro. Keep the story going.

Loved it! Ok just a technical note because I'm a total nerd. I know this isn't the point, but jumping from past and present tense can be distracting to us writers. Now that I covered that, I think you really nailed, pun intended, a time and place sensation. Hot with plenty of suspense. Sequel?

Great cliffhanger. Hot sex. Two characters that are intensely attracted to each other, but there is clearly more to this story. Next chapter please soon! Who’s the guy on the phone? And why is Scott reacting in such a triggered way?

V nice story and I'm a sucker for a pair of shorts. I wear shorts all year round, even when it's -5 C. I'm particularly drawn to a fantastic pair of legs. Good muscle definition, a light dusting of blond hair, strong calves and thick thighs. The sort of legs found on a rugby fly half or winger. That gets my imagination running from there. Fortunately I wear rugger shorts rather well, even if I do say so myself!

Omg. Thanks so much y’all! This story was so much fun to write AND I’m very proud that I seemed to have pulled off being a decent top for y’all! Not gonna lie tho, those 4 ⭐️ hurt with the comparison to my own work! Guess I have to really bring it for Finally, Step Bro 3! 😎

um, I expected something different

It's me, the four-star guy, sorry if that hurt, but it's just one opinion. Not every story can be 4.9 as an exceptional stepbros. No even one author here has all 4.9s on stories, so keep yourself humble, Logan :>

Nice. Don't jump between past and present tense. Less dad bods, more hot bods. On to the next installment!

5 stars? I’d give six. Seven! Please tell me there is a part 2 coming.

So hot! Always love your stories. Hope there is another chapter or perhaps more of Donald. Keep it up since it always keeps me up.

Wait no I need the next chapter!! :) I've enjoyed 2 of your stories so far, this being the 3rd. I just happen to come across your stories from nifty and I've been bingeing. As a fellow Louisianan I'm all about support. Now please upload the next chapter soon😁

Thank you for a story that is beautifully written, hot as fuck, and emotionally gripping. You have made me care about these two men, connect with them, want them to find in each other the happiness that they are each seeking. Every story reflects the mind that gives birth to it, and this story demonstrates the warmth and strength of your heart. I hope that you and the guy you were writing it for are both truly happy.

What a story!!! I’m hard as a rock! You can’t leave it here, please!! I want a top just like him, love the dad bod, just being a regular man. Perfect size, too! (I DO have organs and intestines!!)

FAB big guy! Can’t believe it’s taken me this long to find you as an author. The quality of your writing is not

easy to find. (For one of the best see Mr. Mister) Since it’s been nine months since Chapter One please don’t leave us hanging. The ending tells us you definitely have something in mind.

Oh! I do hope you come back to this one and give us another chapter so we can find out who was calling. I am enjoying your stories. Thank you for sharing your talents with us.