All Comments on 'The Fruit of Another'

Nice one.

good story, please keep writing

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May I Borrow Your Rope, Hodja? - My wife is in the kitchen, as naked as the day she was born, putting flour on my rope.

      Submitted by Abdulbenthere  (Humor & Satire) 12/23/10

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The threat of getting caught, then the big surprise at the end. Very well done!

I hope there's at least one more chapter. If not, the story left me hanging . . . just like Kevin.

Well done, love your stories, I hope you have more on the way.

what a story hehehehe loved it kevin

That ending will sure make things shrink quickly! A well-written, believable story with quite a surprise at the end.

I have to say, the man in cringed a bit at the end, but the ride was worth the crash!

It's hot but Kevin is weak and I am glad he looses it all. I doubt Erica will have a thing to do with him either. Seems fair.