All Comments on 'The Full Proof Plan Ch. 01'

Should be "Fool Proof" Plan; not full proof.

Love your first story. Husbands are really crazy when it comes to giving away their wife just to see what it's like. Most are pissed when they lose out. Mine tried it and he actually liked it and wanted to keep doing it. We have been at it for a while now and loving every hot fucking minute. Can't wait for your next installment to see what the husband will do. xoxoxox Annette

I loved this story. Nice descriptive sex. Please write more.

Lots of good fucking to go until total 24-hour-a-day domination. Cannot wait for next installments!

one of my fantasies is to be intimate with a black man. I've been tempted to try several times and for a long time but never have had the courage to fully let myself go. If I was this lady, my fantasy would certainly come true. I identified with her in her desperate need for his big cock. The story aroused me to no end, thanks

This starts with the first person account from hubby, then in the middle moves to a first person account from the blackmailer. It's unannounced, and sloppy. I stopped reading. There are vast numbers of well written stories on this website. I don't waste my time reading badly written ones. Get some help with writing.

It's fool proof not full proof.

....although the story as a whole, is pretty unlikely.

this is the first story i have seen where the woman does not fall in love with bbc immediately n has to be coerced into sex. the whole act is well written too.

You should probably give your story at least one read over before posting it. The POV changes from the husband to Jonathan without any warning or any explanation.

The expression is 'fool proof'.