All Comments on 'The Funeral'

you write so well. the delivery of exposition is great, it doesn't even feel like exposition. a few paragraphs in and I felt like the characters were alive. the family dynamics were very realistic. the ending felt abrupt, but it's clear that it was intentional and I'm not even mad, because as I said, it was very realistic and it made me uncomfortable, i didn't i was gonna enjoy the sex so much hahahaha

Need to finish it.

Short, sweet and hotter than hell! I never had this desire for my father, but I did for other relatives. Ever thought it would be hot to have a three-some with a couple of them. A little sick maybe, but I guess that's who I am. You captured the mood and their feelings extremely well. ***** plus, thanks. MLF

I hope you continue with future chapters to let us see their relationship evolve still further! I too found the characters to be realistic, as well as very appealing (as people, and as playmates!). Love the fact that the son initiates the contact as soon as he knows what his dad needs.

Please. More.