All Comments on 'The Gambler'

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SummoreSummoreover 2 years ago

Great writing! Chalk up another orgasm!

tomasnytomasnyover 2 years ago

Very good gamble to win back her mom!

BeauqBeauqover 2 years ago

Make it a series...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I was so into it, but when the mother came in it was like an unwelcome cold shower. It felt very forced and completely took me out of the story.

PoganinPoganinover 2 years ago

Pity you decided to add the mother into this because her arrival completely spoils a fantastic story.

MilfStockingsMilfStockingsover 2 years ago

Good job, hope to see more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I loved it

user18user18over 2 years ago

Shame it was so good until the mom came,

BladdddddddBladdddddddover 2 years ago

Like previous comments I was a bit disappointed when the mother showed up, but it was so hot and well written that it kept me hooked to the end

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydog9 months ago

I normally don't do incest but once I reached the point of realization I couldn't stop reading. It was just so unexpected and oh so hot and very erotic. 5 stars

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