by aurorarorawr
I was so into it, but when the mother came in it was like an unwelcome cold shower. It felt very forced and completely took me out of the story.
Pity you decided to add the mother into this because her arrival completely spoils a fantastic story.
Like previous comments I was a bit disappointed when the mother showed up, but it was so hot and well written that it kept me hooked to the end
I normally don't do incest but once I reached the point of realization I couldn't stop reading. It was just so unexpected and oh so hot and very erotic. 5 stars