All Comments on 'The Game Ch. 02'

This story has turned very dark and become like a Criminal Minds episode. It’s turned into a deadly game...

Fun story with great body descriptions! Look forward to seeing what happens with Officer Brad!

This is in the wrong section. It should be in the non-consent section.

Hey guys, thanks for the feedback once again. I’m having fun writing this story, the tone and themes are different than what I’m used to. Please let me know what you do or don’t like so I can grow and improve as I create new projects :D

You definitely need to continue this, just like with your other series. They're all just too good to be unfinished.

Also, the idea of their minds breaking from the endless sensation of cumming is just HOT.

So don't like this game.. Being pick on b/c you are gay also does not give you a right to be evil.. What about mom, how you more mad at the step mom and brother than the dick hopping mom who left you homeless. Like really. Ppl have a life, it was plenty way to get even them this BS so unrealistic! And a turn off, this was so not a game, Jake needs a mental hospital!