by Sara and Ron
I couldn't wait for the next installment and you didn't let me down. Awesome!!!! Can't wait to see what Rachel finds out next!!!
The sexual tension is great - the characters more real than any other erotica I have read before. Found myself thinking about this story today at work - what a great diversion! thanks ;)
Excellent. I've loved the story so far and its still just as erotic as when it started. Keep it coming!
Wow this is a great piece of erotic writing Ireally love the erotic tension will keep an eye open for next instalment sorry for bad engish it is not my irt language
Wow! I've read all the chapters of The Game so far and I thought I had been turned on before...but this one was fantastic. Thank you so much for sharing these erotic stories!