All Comments on 'The Garden Centre of Eden'

Good build up not unrealistic situation.

Hi, here from the ND contest. Fun story, well written story that does a very nice job showing the apprehensions one might have and how they might be eased over time. The event and what followed turned out great, and I was smiling and almost humming the Mission Impossible theme as they prepared to visit the HI Express. Well done, and good luck in the contest.

Cannot believe only 2 comments. This is a really sweet story about the awakening of a young woman. A little bit of drama with the blackmail plot and I'd like to know how the pastor took Eve's perticipation - was she thrown out of the church? Might have been a bit more drama there.

Overall very enjoyable and a worthy entry. Good luck. 5 from me.

What a lovely story!

What a lovely story!

Just the sort of story I like. We got to know the characters before the sex which was nicely plausible. I smiled at the humour of KYTV.