All Comments on 'The Gas'

Ahh yes, magic rape drugs. How original

I loved this. Bring on chapter 2 with the pixie! If she says no, I want him to keep drugging her until she is addicted to only him unless he tells her to do it to someone else. Then she does it out of love for her Master.

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Is it really a rape drug when with full consensual participation from all parties involved? Payback is a bitch, especially concerning big pharma! Hope there is a follow up story. Please include some heteropaternal superfecundation twins for the twin sisters. Some salt and pepper twin babies for each twin would be the ultimate payback for big phrma daddy!!!

Lmfao… funny as hell! Hope there will be more to this sci-fi story… NOT set in space. Thanks

Interesting story, well written I hope there is a follow up

Thanks for writing

part 2 hopefully

whats the fucking point of a revenge story wherein the object of your revenge neither knows or cares about it?

Love it, can't wait for more.

Part 2 please

This story is not finished there’s too many expectations! It needs chapter 2 and may 3 very soon!

This story needs a second chapter. You've set up an ok story, but left us waiting for all the stuff it would take for it to make sense. If you have given up on this story to devote your time to Caleb, I totally applaud your priorities. Just add this to your "someday I'll get around to it" list and be prepared for it to be panned.

What happens next???

I've been hoping for a second installment to this story line. I have been following "Caleb" religiously. I think that "Mike's Wish" has some good potential as well. I'm always on the lookout for something new from you. Keep the creative juices flowing.

A bit boring after a while.