All Comments on 'The Gentle Cowboy Ch. 04'

by mermaid_girl

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
continue please

we have waited so long for your next stories. do not keep us waiting long. good writing as always...bravo!!! :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Welcome Back!

I just love this series. It was definitely worth waiting for. Please don't make us wait so long for the next chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I feel sorry for Derrick but I'm glad Daisy is with Jake. I hope he lets her see how he really feels about her.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Glad to see....

u back and im hopin some HAWWTT lovin soon for these two!!!!

ScarletKScarletKover 14 years ago
Brilliant!

Yay! More Jake & Daisy! This story is one of my favourites & updates are always welcome.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
WTH?

Awww MG, you are such a tease! You call that short reading a chapter?!? MORE PLEASE and soon, I can't wait!

spearman1spearman1over 14 years ago
WTF?

That was just mean and cruel MG!!! We had to wait forever for that little snipet of the story. Whatever we did to deserve such cruelty we are sorry. More and soon please!!

SmokeYouOutSmokeYouOutover 14 years ago
more

love it! can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Awwww

Awwwww come on!! All the chapters of this story are good, but they're way too short! You roped me in and left me hanging. So not cool.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
next chapter please...

common, dont let us wait too long for the next chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
aawww

please, please, please

go on with writing! i love your stories, especially the gentle cowboy series. you are awsome!

jake and daisy have to be together forever!!!

thx for your efforts :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Finish Please

You have to finish this story. I love how well you use their internalized stories. Please finish this.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
seriously finish the story

love the depth you've created in your characters.

It's hilarious that they simply can't talk to each other and therefore misinterpret each other.

It's also a pretty hot story. you've got to complete it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
please finish

Come on it's a new year already, finish this story . Do not leave us hanging, this is so good. Make finishing this story your New Years resolution.

Hime_HimikoHime_Himikoover 14 years ago
Please continue!!

Your stories are so good! Plz Continue writing!!! We miss your amazing work. We're left hanging....Need more........

NellaBarely2NellaBarely2over 12 years ago
Good show ...

I like the emotional hold you have on your readers, while you put the characters together with real life reluctance, hesitation and deep personal interest(s) together ... Slowly. I'm glad I came online after you produced enough of the start for us late bloomers to play catchup. Enjoying theneasy read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Best so far

Why didnt i stumbled upon this story sooner??? Givin' me goosebumps all over!!

LilacQueen15LilacQueen15almost 4 years ago

Need some background on why Jake feels he is a dark person and doesn't deserve love. Why did they stop playing together as kids?

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