All Comments on 'The Gentlemans Club'

Grammar and punctuation need some serious editing - their/there/they're....... reply's/replies are not interchangable.. use of apostrophes needs to be checked with one of the 'How To' submissions.

People visit a strip club and arrange for a lap dance. This ignites the sexual action which only intensifies as more people join in. Things get rather wild from that point on.

Interesting! Good Read!