by joefelton
And I really like the way you wrapped it up. Thanks for giving us so much reading pleasure.
Yes,this was too drawn out.Yes,the cross-dressing and pegging weren't my thing,BUT the description of the dance at the bachelorette party was priceless! I rated it 5 !
I pay nothing for these stories, and usually derive great plasure from them. I just don't understand some people's criticism.
Your story was excellent. It was hot, it was very well-written and it told the story clearly, despite the large case of characters. Nice work!