All Comments on 'The Ghost of East Hill Bridge'

by QuietBedlam21

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a sweet story! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Superb! A really good and interesting story. Good development and no need for hard banging scenes.

I would appreciate a sequel. Maybe he starts a restaurant near the bridge or somewhere else and names it after her. Maybe she then is able to materialize again as some kind of destiny fulfilled. She could become a singer in the restaurant who knows what fantasy is up to. :D

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really hope this is an entry in the Halloween Contest, you've got 5 stars from me!

Pharmboy69Pharmboy69over 2 years ago

Wow, what a story. Very unique. 5 stars for sure. Thank you for writing!

RatdogtwoRatdogtwoover 2 years ago

Awesome Story Great Job. 5 Stars.

Fereniki_AlexandrouFereniki_Alexandrouover 2 years ago

Excellent story! I gave it five stars. I can tell you planned out how the story would end from the beginning, but it still had a bit of a twist to it. I thought I knew where the story was heading from fairly early, but it ended up having a much sweeter, more melancholy ending than I was expecting.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very very nice story. No meandering bullshit but a storyline worth following and still applicable to literotica. PLUS it has an ending! Loved it

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I've written as a hobby for most of my life and written erotica since I first discovered it. As with all creation some of it was terrible, some of it was good, but almost none of it was ever shared. Then one day I realized: why not? What have I got to lose? People will eit...