All Comments on 'The Gift'

Short, but very sweet.

I usually skip over 1 pages. Most authors can’t get done with a shorty. But you just put that opinion away for good. Granted I loved your previous story, so I thought I’d give this one a try. You didn’t let me down. What a beautiful day in the life tale.

Like Slurpy before me, I usually prefer something longer that I can get my teeth into but The Gift is one of the exceptions to the rule. The passage where Bonnie was buying the gift for her lover was especially touching. A just about perfect tale.

Bonnie and Virginia seem to have the opposite of "a chilling effect." :)

Glad to find some backstory on Becky and Cindy.

Lovely ...... Goes straight through my heart

Beautiful! I loved it.

Just the sort of story my daughter needs. To remind her of what a HAPPY relationship should look like.

WELL DONE iv read it before and it brings me a smile be well safe and happy a fan shayne