All Comments on 'The Gift Box Ch. 08'

by SinsiousSiren

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Very Good

I didn't have trouble reading it at all, thanks.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
I hope that Emily is carrying Scott's child

Scott needs to make sure he takes care of his mother's sexual needs along with her need to be loved. A great story and hope to read more soon Thanks ....Rich

clark3001clark3001over 14 years ago
Really good, looking forward to more

The situation is confusing right now with both Tangy and Emily carrying Scott's child. If Tangy loved Scott...this is a strange way to show it by hurting him. Please end her character somehow. If Scott does take over from his dad then you have to write more chapters on their new life.

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