All Comments on 'The Gift of Giving'

by _in_bloom

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
So good ...

... and so rare ... to read something along these lines written by a person who at least seems to have played as we have. Whether you have or not doesn't matter. You write it well. Thanks!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

It was a marvelous gift.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerr8 months ago

As you said, it wasn't quite a story, but it was very erotic and conjured up some very sexy visual images!

Well done ;->

_in_bloom_in_bloom7 months agoAuthor

I'm so glad to hear that you've had a good time alongside my thoughts and memories ;)

And, yes, not a story. No narrative thrust, no escalation of tension or rush toward completion. But the same can be said of occasionally very wonderful nights: languid, leisurely exploration of one another, giving & receiving joy. I had hoped to conjure some sense of that sort of evening, and am thrilled to know that these words have brought you a bit of fun ;)

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