All Comments on 'The Girl'

a really nice and well written story

Lovely short story. Can I be Jesse ??

...And fantasy <sigh>, that gets the blood moving... nothing wrong with that. Unfortunately reality ends up quite differently. Nice dream tho, well written and anazingly respectful in all aspects of the TG's experience... thank you for sharing your story and I hope you will write more such as this!

Your writing style really paints images in my mind.

What an erotic natural fantasy this was...I can imagine both characters orgasms, I'm Soo jealous of their sexscapedes.