All Comments on 'The Girl from the Ouachita Ch. 02'

Really enjoying this story and looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for posting them so close together.

Cheers

SAGE

Excellent story. I loved the innocent teasing from Chris' family. 5 BIG FAT TWINKLY STARS!

Going very well, looking forward to more. Hope nothing derails this love story.

Amazing storytelling, a very pleasant read. I hope she has a much better life and experiences than as she did growing up as you continue.

2 great parts. So, where is part 3??????? Thanks for the story and keep writing

Chapter 3 submitted 2/14

Very nice. Seems a bit slower paced than some of your other stories.

The task of a writer is to hook the reader early on. You did that, well, in Chapter 1. Chapter 2 continues along. OK, you've promised Chapter 3, I'm IN. I could see this one going many chapters, as I'm curious and care about Chris and Jo and their whole menagerie of supporting characters.

You spin a fine story! Love it.

Bravo Texican!! Looking forward to following this to the finale.

As a native Texan living 'abroad' in a foreign state, I enjoyed the journey back and you are correct regarding loyalty to H.E.B. LOL

Chapter 3 coming 2/19

Ah, you should of hit Fuzzy's on Berry. Fish taco's, ummmm........

Great story but in talking about the New Years games you left out the strongest and most important Texas team the Aggies. Who cares about the lamehorns!

Who in the hell is Christian Brady? I thought that his name was Alexander? I didn't pile on about the clerical errors in the first chapter because I myself understand self editing. I try my best before handing it over to my BETA team hoping for them to catch what ever I may have missed. But this chapter was totally bug riddled. I dropped you to 4/5 primarily for that reason. I love a slow burn more than most, but even this one is kind of moving too slow for my own tastes. 🐌

Good one.

Love the story. I use to walk the trails along the Trinity River, starting at Clearfork walking toward downtown, past Colonial County Club. If you haven’t had brunch at the Press Cafe, the filet mignon and eggs is worth every cent. I am curious about one thing. I can’t tell, but if Chris’ apartment is adjacent to the shops at Clearfork, why didn’t he take Jo shopping at Neiman Marcus instead of Dillards? Oh well, Chris must have had his reasons. Looking forward to Chapter 3.