All Comments on 'The Girl in the Beret'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

You didn't finish this story. Too Bad, as you started it so well

GreaserBobGreaserBobabout 6 years ago
A tease of a story

I kind of agree, a very good start with an abrupt finish and no explicit promise of a part 2. I thought the characters should be left hanging if we are, but they appear to be continuing without us.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Good start ... pls continue ...

... appealing fantasy ... nice plot twist.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
cute beret lady are the best

I am not in to bdsm/ be rough with a women but I love how you set up the begin.

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