All Comments on 'The Girl In Yellow'

by AJParliament

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Hope that they cross path again! Great story :)

jenorma2012jenorma2012almost 6 years ago
pretty good

I was hoping she would have joined her, but I guess not maybe next time

SimonBrookeSimonBrookealmost 6 years ago
Wow, top work!

You really captured the narrator, really communicated her to me. And that is such a hot scenario!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Lesbian Sex?

Did I miss that part? Toys n Masturbation of Exhibitionist n Voyeur maybe. Almost an interesting story tho. Could have been much better. Only your 2d story here so a lot of room for improvement. Keep trying.

1 star

DragonRider55

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
More

Another chapter having these 2 meet again would very hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Fuck

Please fuck me right now i'm fucking wettttt ughhhhhh

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
I’m getting hot

Your story was so go I almost touched myself 😭 Make a part two please I want them to meet again pleaseee

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
This was so sexy.

That was so erotic. I could imagine the scenario. I am male. You made me wank.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Wet pussy

I just mastrubated to this

JoyJoy4MeJoyJoy4Meover 5 years ago

Enjoyed this. Now I will read chapter two.

germanchocolate4ugermanchocolate4uover 5 years ago

Good start. Now let's see where it goes

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