All Comments on 'The Girl Inside'

Great stuff, really nice little story! Please keep writing!

lovely story! Thanks for sharing it!

I would love to be hypnotised and let my Girl Inside out

Fionasometimes

This is a good story! I would love to see a part 2!

Possibly turn Kevin into a total bisexual trans where Dana and her friends have sex with Vee fucking each one and eat each others pussies.I am not sure if Dana hypnotized Kevin out of greed or love or both,but its obvious Kevin seemed so much happier being Vee,and wish Dana would let Vee stay the way she is.

Dana on one hand doesn't seem like a bad girl and love Vee more as a girl while Vee could still give Dana her cock like Kevin did but with a touch of girly emotion and they could live and love happily ever after.

This was AWESOME! Please continue it as a series.

Abuse of trust is NEVER sexy. Who cares if there’s a hypno-orgasm? Not me! Shame on the bitch called Dana!

Two stars for dislike.

Don't listen to that last anon, great work and keep it up :}

Well I guess Kevin was plural and has been violated just because his so called girlfriend wanted to get off...