All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door!'

love this story maybe you could move it along a little further where Alice becomes pregnant and Stephen becomes more feminized with hormones

So brilliant loved every word

The pace feels a little bit rushed, but otherwise i love this. 5 stars! Thanks!

Great story. Loved how everyone got exactly what they needed :)

Great read. Some commentary on the writing: if Nicole liked Stephen, she should have acted playful or seductive around him instead of smug, Stephen having a nice penis was established and never used, same with that condom he filled, Nicole and Scarlet could have used more character development. Aside from that, liked everything.

Terrific story. Maybe could’ve been 2 parts spending a bit more time on Nicole and Stephen before moving to Scarlet but 5 stars

Love this kind of story, husband seduced by aggresive futa! Can I request story with similar theme, where a man seduced by futa and marry this girl who he just met instead of his beloved fiancee ? That would be so hot!

So good need more of this vault stuff it’s great

hi, i didn't finish reading the strory yet.

just wanted to point out that i find the initial deal (rent vs staying every night with Nicole) makes no sense.

even if the rent was 2000 it would mean that Nicole is paying 66$ a night and that Alice is ok for a job for 8$ an hour xD.

that's a sheep whore IMO.

I always like your stories keep up the good work.

Amazing storry,

I really liked the braking down of stephen gradually.

Would have been nice imo if he had found a job and alice would have refused to stop seeing nicole.

I would also have enjoyed if he tried to keep is pride a bit longer after witnessing his first futa cock.

Thanks for the storry.

Nice couple destroyed by trannies no husband and no wife ,wife is not having any guilt she was appointed as whore all wife fault, now his life even miserable he lost his wife and his ass and pride

Wow❤️ fantastic tale. From one type of pleasure to another. Well... He did make himself sexier for the futa. Taking the hormones after he started to figure what transitions it was doing to him. An sealed the lust his landlord had of him.

Would be a sweet transition in real life

Love to read a continuation.

I loved it. I felt Stephen’s pain at losing his wife that way and was so pleased for him to be owned by Scarlet.

Reading him being slowly broken down to the point of submission was really sexy. I was jerking off as he sucked cocked and rimmed ass. I dumped my own load as I read him taking Scarlet’ s huge cock.

WOW! love the way you write, i couldnt get enough! Wish there was part 2 or similar story, will check out your other work as well. Good Work! 5 stars from me!

Awesome story, particularly liked that Scarlett Character, here's hoping you do a part 2 with her and Stephen :))

more futa on female stories please... loved the cuckolding!