All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door – 750 Word Version'

This shows the limits of very short stories.

If you involve too many characters, there are not enough letters available to write something that can make you understand their actions.

This story has so many unlikely elements to it, that when they're lumped together, the story just comes out as a bad script for a porn movie.

2*

Definitely unlikely, but not unlikeable little adventure. Enjoyable little read.