All Comments on 'The Girl Next Door Ch. 01'

Recipe.Take all the worn out cliches available. Mix them vigorously with as much hyperbole and purple prose as can be packed into a short essay .Cook hot & very long.Serve with a garnish of "oooohs and aaaaahs" and threaten us with more of the same if we like it!!

The hell of it is we do like it - even without a single new idea or the vaguest nuance of originality.If you were taking the mickey out of this genre it was brilliant - if you weren't God help us .I marked it as a mickey take, but I'm a bit worried ?

I loved this story.

i need more kleenex.

keep going, this is terrific.

this has to be one of the best stories i have read in a long time. keep it up, and keep'em coming.

Please tell us about Debbie, all the details !!!

man this story was great. it totally appealed to my high school days thinking about the hottest girls in school. good job and keep it up!

Your have a talent!! I loved it. I want more!

Great !!!!!!!

Where are the next chapters?????

more! moRE! MORE!

this was the best dirty story i have ever read i loved it i would love to read another one

Blow all your brains out...if only everyone could share this fantasy!

cant u make a video lol

This happened to me last summer I swear... Jk

Every men should live in a house that has a swimming pool. Nice, hot, funny story . it was pleasure to read :D

I very much enjoyed the story. It reminds me of times long ago. I did wonder about birth control.

There must be another one! The readers demand it!

I guess you could call me an old bugger having just turned 70 though most people take me for 50.

I guess growing up in the 50's and 60"s it was a different world.

But I like reading about young kids loosing their innocence in a happy and believable way

I guess you ace'd it with this story and I look forward to more.

A second chapter is deffinatly is a must read

I really liked this one, though it was very similar to the other one about your sister'sfriend. And I would love a follow-up.

unsexy

I can confirm that. Within a few lines the author declared that the characters were over 18. Then the girl had to be a big breasted cheerleader and the guy had to have a 9-inch dick. In another word, just the usual dumb story plot one may expect from Literotica.

A little far-fetched primarily is sizes and endurance! Even for teen-agers-18+, but considering it as "First Time"--guess it can be accepted as a 3-out-of 5 rating for the descriptions!

A bit over the top but great just the same. On the other hand when I was at school you just did not get this far so what would I know?

It would be great to read more about these two people and have a happily ever after ending.

Go to it.

Gave it four stars,had it not been for the 9" cock I would have gave it five stars, all in all i was a great story.

This packed some heat nice 5 stars and about the 9" guys can dream right lol

I really like this Story .

... yes, it would be good to bring in Debbie ... then maybe a three way... love to see more ...