All Comments on 'The Girl or the Group? Ch. 01'

Looking forward to more! Fantastic rewards for a job well done. BTW, very nicely written and really nicely different from anything else that I have read!

I look forward to the future adventures of Pete, Erica, Jenna, and Caroline. But who is "Carl", mentioned on page 1?

Hi - To answer the question, 'Carl' is basically a US Army meme. Like 'that guy' in the unit. I can see that wasn't clear in what I wrote, so hope this helps. Thanks again!

I had a lot to say, but now I'm just thinking.

I want to add more, I thought this to be your best line.

She smelled of jasmine and girl and heaven, and tasted of sweetest, sweetest Erika.

One dick, one tongue, three women, and all night.

Peter let us know about your career, after tonight and tommorow.

This can't be a end to this story, I can imagine a lot.

I want to hear it from you

is Ch 02 out?

Love the way you paint us a picture with your story.