All Comments on 'The Girl or the Group? Ch. 04'

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Lil_kitty over 3 years ago

Really enjoyed all 4 chapters! Looking forward to the next story ;)

Anonymousover 1 year ago

Marvellous! Very promising so far! Can't wait for more.

vanye about 1 year ago

A shame there was no follow up, though I suspect there would have been some heartbreak in there for hero. It sounds like Erica has already gotten some sort of a connection with someone, possibly Lars. Maybe she is his submissive, and this was a reward for Peter doing well? And unfortunately the two of them caught feelings, but she's not free to be anything more than shared. However, despite Jen being a bit of a bitch, this was very erotic.

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Hi, I massively appreciate any feedback and votes - it really does motivate me to write more. I'm returning to writing here after a bit of a gap, and hope to make a good contribution. Really enjoyed many stories on this great site.

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