All Comments on 'The Girl Who Dared Herself'

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JeanCFNMJeanCFNM10 months ago

Great start ...I hope you will do a follow-up

JBEdwardsJBEdwards10 months ago

"We'll see," is ambiguous. If she had said "Maybe," then that's a yes. But toys or not, I suspect they'll enjoy getting to know each other. Great story. Maybe after a few dates he'll learn what the H stands for? 5*~~JB

LenardSpencerLenardSpencer10 months ago

Great story. A young woman, getting to grips with her erotic fantasies. However, the way you wrote Brian at first, just painted him as a weak moron. Sara was asking him some questions for which he had to answer Yes or No. But the moron seldom answered correctly. Saying things like "Of course..." So Sara had to keep reminding the idiot, Yes or No. In the final question she aske "... which holes would he fill...and position..." and still the dickhead didn't give a complete answer. He still didn't tell her which "hole".

Then when the useless moron got home he starts telling his now Ex. Why? Even she says it's too late to get her jealous. Brian was being a pathetic, weak, idiot... again. No wonder she left him.

NocteneNoctene10 months ago

Sweet and sexy! What a fun premise

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