by ChrystalWynd
The story is so ridicuolously short that it shouldn't even be called a story.
very funny story and that is the most stupid ass kid ever!!
way too dumb to my liking!!
As an old man, I wish I knew more rebellious kids like that. Good story!
Another little gem from CrystalWynd, short, but in those few words there's a lot of humour topped with a delicious helping of sex
Bravo!
Yes it was short but was still a good story. Not all stories need to be novel length. You developed it well and maintained the correct pace through the ending.