by Jeremydcp
I am going to be eagerly awaiting the next installment. I am totally curious about what is going to happen with this 18 year old innocent girl.
Excellent start! I've had this in my reading list for a while - well worth the wait. Looking forward to the next parts.
Thank you
I've read this before, but it seems to read smoother than I remember. Have you worked on it a bit? I gave you a five star review, good job.
I did like it. Well once it got going. It was a long build up which I put down many times to get through. But I did not abandon the read and once the narrative became more meaty and interesting it held my attention for sure. There is now intrigue which spurs me on more.
You're a good writer, better than I sadly.
It seem to me this is better suited for a female audience. Playing to some female fantasies.
Horny slutty girl in the perfect whore house.
I will read a little further. Is it all just the authors fantasies or is there something deeper to the story to sink my interest in, I'm hoping for some tension of some type.