All Comments on 'The Girls of Club Aphrodite Ch. 01'

Although I must say it felt like the first part of the first chapter, and I could have dealt with the next two scenes included in this chapter. Still, I look forward to reading what comes next.

"to just fuck you, get dressed and bugger off feels like a bad way of ending the evening."

"That's kind of how it works," she said.

But beforehand she has done much to ensure that it "works" very differently.

In his Fatima character, our author has created a lady who either is a very clever marketer of her services or somebody who should be in a different business.

Well done, FreddieTheCamel. I look forward to your stories about the other girls in this unusual establishment.

Lue

I loved the way your story wasn't a conventional way of dealing with a sex work or sex for sell. I would like to see you carry this on a few pages and see where it goes.

Johnny